Dear president,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the lastest technological advencedened.
We have invented a time machine that works very well. I want to publish in the newspapers but first you can check if it works well this works with a technological engine that funcins with water and vapor, the cooler its a propeller of an aeroplane and all the body of the machine is make of steel of a car that we found with steve last week. We have my friends house
I look foward to meeting you
Best wishes
Max poweerr!.
"Advencedened" is not a word, "advancement" is the correct word. There are some spelling and punctuation mistakes.You've written only 2 paragraphs. Remember the letter is formal
ResponderEliminarI found it a bit difficult to follow your letter... May you rewrite it? I think the letter is worth it!
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